I like this one actually - the colour - the strong focus the various people in behind the windows do get in this image - and to a certain degree also the panning.
Nothing wrong with the panning - but it misses a touch focus as far as I'm concerned.
I believe that the crop on the right side isn't optimal - the guy trying to see what happening in front of the tram is quite fascinating.
Always easy to spot some small areas of improvement - but the main idea - and result is actually kind of interesting to look on.
maybe a little rough the whole presentation - maybe a bit '' conceptional '' thoughts would bring it out much stronger.

Stilig! Dynamisk. Liker godt at personene inne i trikken trer så klart frem, det hever bildet syns jeg.

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Jeg ser selv flere ting som kan forbedres med dette bildet, men er fornøyd med tanke på at det er første gang jeg prøver panorering... Ja, synd mannan bakerst ble kuttet litt.